Rhyming Love Poem
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08-20-2008, 12:02 PM
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Alright, since you all have been crying and whining about my poems not rhyming, I've decided to post a few that I took a damn long time on and did make them rhyme.
So there you go, enjoy:
Quote: | Broken dams and fading memories
Nights in blue with lights and sound
Something moving in the distance
Kill it when it comes around.
Lock it out and down forever
Keep your heart a crying stone
Look forever while they think
You think it's fun to be alone.
Choking velvet, bitter laughter
Watch and scream and bravely smile
Just remember somehow it will
All be over in a while.
Dance it out in tarantella
Let it out to keep your head
Lock it up and burn it over
Keep it quiet
Keep it dead. | |
08-20-2008, 12:39 PM
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it some what rhymes but i still like it
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08-24-2008, 11:37 AM
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ABCB
ABCB
ABCB
ABCDB | |
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